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Shaman King (2021) - S01E16 - Enter The Ultra-Pompadour.mkv (503.4 MiB)
I'm going to point out some things I wasn't pointing out in previous corrections, related to how sentences spanning multiple screens of text are handled. If you agree it looks better with the changes, it's worth going back to check over previous episodes as well.
02:19, 02:21, I'd add a comma after "weird", and then lowercase "But" in the next line.
02:27 missing a period
02:29 missing a period
02:34 similar to the first lines I pointed out, I'd end this line with a comma and not capitalize the start of the next line.
02:37 in addition to the above change, there's a missing period
02:48 missing period
02:56 missing period
03:08 missing period
03:17 missing period
03:30 missing period
03:31 missing period
03:42 missing period
03:53 missing period
03:56 missing period
05:02 "Blaumro" sounds wrong to me (sounds more like "Blamuro"), but I'm guessing it was intentional since that's apparently used in an official english translation.
05:08 add comma to the end
05:12 lowercase the "A", add a period
05:47 missing period
05:53 missing period
06:45 "vampire," this comma doesn't belong
07:33 missing period
07:44 missing period
08:10 missing period
08:13 add a comma to the end
08:14 missing period
08:22 add comma after "Yeah"
08:32 missing period
08:59 missing period
09:38 missing period
09:54 missing period
10:06 missing period
10:12 "it's" -> "its"
10:19 "it's" -> "its"
10:34 missing period
To be continued because this was too long for one post...
11:23 "your your" -> "your", add a comma after "Goldva-sama"
12:30 missing period
12:46 missing period
13:10 missing period
13:26 missing period
13:40 missing period
13:44 "But" is in the middle of a sentence and should be lowercase here
13:49 missing period
13:52 missing period
14:10 add an apostrophe before "cause" ('cause)
14:21 missing period
14:50 missing period
14:51 missing period
15:06 missing period
15:27 missing period
15:29 missing period
16:03 missing period or maybe a comma at the end
16:09 missing period
16:12 add a comma after "Vlad"
16:21 missing period
16:33 missing period
17:29 "are" -> "were" to match the tense of the previous line
17:36 missing period
17:49 missing period
18:09 missing period
18:13 missing period
18:32 missing period
18:40 "was" -> "were" (because "right and wrong" = multiple things)
18:49 this should probably be two sentences, broken up where the comma is
18:56 I'd add a comma after "Hehehe", and then there's a missing period as well
19:09 "if" -> "is", also missing period
19:20 missing period
20:11 missing period
20:25 I feel like the three words here should be punctuated, either comma separated or maybe all with an exclamation point
20:41 missing period
20:47 missing period
20:56 missing period
21:08 "ghost enslaving" -> "ghost-enslaving"
21:22 missing period
21:39 "would be" -> "were"
22:00 missing period
22:04 add a comma to the end
22:09 lowercase the "Or" at the start
That took a lot longer than usual, but a comment I saw on the episode 18 upload pointed out the missing periods and I decided it was probably worth noting them.
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