Sorry to do this to you guys but a qcer visited ep 00 and found more mistakes:
9:10, looks like a line repetition/unsure line formatting? the line at 9:10 conveys that Ryume sends her ki into lines that flows throughout the city, but the line immediately after repeats that information saying "And it flows throughout the city." Here's the exact line before just for reference "Ryume-sama sends her Ki out into the ley lines so it then flows throughout the city."
15:02, the word "Golden" gets repeated "...becoming Golden Golden Knight Garo on."
19:45, just a grammar thing, I don't thing the comma is needed after "can you come" having "Rian-sama, can you come at least?" would work.
21:49, just a minor nitpick/inconsistency. The line here is "What the hell happened here?!" but earlier before the preview at 21:19, it was "What the hell happened?!" I know this is super small, but might as well mention it.
22:27, Dougai's name is missing an "i". "That's Douga Ryuuga?"
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